Friday, February 12, 2010

Never Chapter 3, Page 5

First of all, can I say how happy I am that we're out of the dark? Never needs a bit of sunshine I think. Secondly, I'm not sure this really works the way that I hoped, so I will explain. Aalex is supposed to be thinking about Len after having hit his head and that thought leads him to thoughts of a girl from three years ago. Back when things were good and Aalex actually smiled. And when he wasn't bleeding from the ears.

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